Lightening Bugs in a Jar

Put the lesser stars
In jars,
And watch the lanterns fade -
Afraid.
Grin in that despotic way
And stay
To watch your subjects fly
And die...
Kill the lesser stars
With jars.

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  1. Your naming lightening bugs "the lesser stars" pleases me, as do the rhyme and cadence, and the light, pretty morbidity; both made it fun to read aloud in my own bard's voice. (And he won't deign to perform just anything, so that's a compliment in itself.)

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